It’s finally finished. If the first two books are finished, I feel relieved after finishing this book. I’m really tired after writing it! Let’s do a self-examination first, what is the biggest problem in the middle and later stages of this book-it is the Ninja League!
Repentance Ali Jack Ma, I should not have a high fever. Why is it said that the alliance is the biggest failure, because the appearance of the alliance makes this book lose the “taste” of Hokage! Book friends who have read my book should know that I seldom write according to the original plot, and this book is the same, but the problem is that I have taken a big step and changed the framework!
It’s not that you can’t change the frame, but you have to have that kind of writing skills, and I’m a negative example. The new frame was not built, but the frame of Naruto disappeared! Maybe everyone will find it novel at first, but soon it will not feel like a fan.
In addition to the framework, the appearance of the alliance has also made me feel at a loss, and many cool points cannot be used. For example, it was possible to pretend to be aggressive from the side of the explanation of the new generation, and tell the new ninjas of the other four major ninja villages how powerful the protagonist is, but now, who is it to pretend to be? It can’t be that the Alliance Ninja doesn’t even know how powerful their boss is, right? And that’s just one of them, many of the cool things I thought of were impossible to implement because of this **** alliance!
As I said when I opened the book, this book was originally supposed to be eight or nine hundred chapters, but it was cut by a third, because those cool points are no longer cool points, and there is no way to write them out!
Actually, the Ninja League is also included in the outline, but it is placed at the end. In the Fifth Ninja World War, the three-party war between Konoha, the virtual organization, and the shell organization was fierce. The other four major ninja villages can only linger on under the protection of Konoha, which makes them have a great psychological gap. They thought they were the masters of the world, but they turned out to be nothing, their pride was torn to pieces, and they finally joined the alliance.
But why did I advance the alliance to the mid-term? Because I was kidnapped by the will of the protagonist in the book!
To be precise, I didn’t control the rhythm well and let the protagonist dominate the four battles, but the protagonist must have a purpose for spending so much effort. Drink poison to quench thirst! Although I know I shouldn’t do this, but for the sake of normal logic, I can only do this!
From that time on, I knew that the path of this book was crooked, and it was difficult to write any interesting plots. I wanted to save a wave through a copy of the parallel world, but in the end I still couldn’t save the crooked plot. return!
It’s really a pity, I should have been able to write a better plot!
In addition to the alliance, there are actually many problems in this book, one of which is rhythm! In fact, when I set the outline, it was confirmed. In the early stage, it was normal to upgrade and fight, to become the strongest in the ninja world, with the Kyuubi Rebellion as the dividing point.
The mid-term is to explore the hidden plot, and use the identity of Aizen to advance the main plot, and the later stage is to expose all the foreshadowing one by one, leading to the vortex under the ninja world, and finally detonating the fifth ninja war.
It can be seen that the early and late stages are relatively more refreshing, and the middle stage may be dull. This is something I could have predicted before publishing the book. Unfortunately, I overestimated myself at the time, thinking that I could use plots and jokes instead of fun, but I didn’t do it.
A part of the plot before the Nine Tails Rebellion and a part of the plot after that should be the lowest evaluation in the whole book. Many book friends said that it was watery and boring. If you have to codewords in a noisy environment, the state is not good.
So I was in a very impatient mood at the time, cut off a lot of plots, and pushed the plots to the fourth battle as quickly as possible. It can be said that it indirectly led to the early appearance of the alliance.
If the rhythm here is messed up, the rhythm of the rest will be messed up. Why do I write so hard in the later stage, and I often ask for leave? It is because I have to think about the plot of the day, temporarily conceive the outline, and I have to think about it later. The plot does not conflict, it is too difficult!
The latter stage can be said to be the place where the plot is cut the most. Except for the Naruto trio, Twelve Xiaoqiang almost disappears all the way, can you believe it?
But I can’t help it. The plot originally designed for them doesn’t feel any better because of the alliance! The sense of superiority is based on comparison. When all ninja villages become one family and there are no foreign enemies, the sense of superiority is gone!
So, I can only cut the branch line and try not to irrigate it. This is the last dignity I can reserve for myself.
In addition to rhythm, another major issue is combat. To be honest, the division of Naruto’s combat power is too pitted. The difference between the strongest on the surface and the strongest in the dark can be as high as three or four levels.
If the protagonist’s strength has been mixed at the shadow level, then there are battles to write about, but what about the later stage? You can’t force it to open, it’s 999 for a knife, right? But what if the protagonist’s strength gradually improves? It is also difficult to find suitable enemies.
Some fans directly increase the strength of the enemy, or create a few powerful enemies. I don’t want to do this. I can only rely on the protagonist to be behind the scenes and turn the battle into a link to promote the plot. But the problem is, doing so will give people a feeling of playing house, in short, it is a dilemma!
In addition to not being able to find a suitable opponent in battle, there is another troublesome place that is “playing”.
For Datongmu, there are generally three ways for colleagues. First, ignore them, and end the plot directly after the fourth battle. Anyway, it is a “spoiler”, and it doesn’t affect it. Second, open and hang through the system. Although I don’t like the system flow, I have to say that most of the problems encountered in the writing process can be solved through the system. How many brain cells will be saved! Third, learn from the barbarians’ skills to control the barbarians, and use Otsutsuki’s ability to defeat Otsutsuki.
Before I started the book, I thought, Hokage has been finished for so many years, and I have written everything that can be written. I should try my best to create something new, so I played with the local system, and combined Kaguya, Liudao, and Hamura with the three major systems. Correspondence (Of course, I am not sure if there are other books written like mine, after all, there are too many fans, it is impossible to find them all).
In short, my main idea is to defeat Otsutsuki through knowledge and practice, but the questions written in this way are very dramatic, giving people a feeling of fantasy cultivation.
In addition to the above points, there are actually many problems in this book, but they are not that important, so I will not review them one by one.
Speaking of the new book, it has a lot of inspiration and the subject matter is undecided.
What has limited me is my hand speed, not my inspiration. If I have the hand speed and thinking of an eagle, I can finish three or four books a year.
At present, the idea has several major items such as the heavens, the end of the world, pirates, death, entertainment, and wilderness.
Although these titles are old-fashioned at first glance, I think that I can write well if I put new wine in old bottles.
I see that some book friends asked me what kind of protagonist to write in my next book. It’s hard to say, but I usually write more stable characters. I personally don’t like frivolous and frivolous protagonists.
There are also book friends who say that my battles are too rational and I don’t feel passion. This is indeed the case. If the next book is about fighting, I will try to find a balance between blood and reason.
As for the extra episode, ahem, let’s forget about it, my current state is too bad, and I can’t read the extra episode (つД`).
Finally, let’s talk about the date of the new book, which may be far away.
First of all, I passed the supervision last year, and I have passed the internship in Yijian, and I have to take the exam on 9.12. I have to hurry up and review from today. After finishing this test, there will be a first-level cost test on 10.30/31.
After finishing this exam, I will see if I can ask for leave to go to the hospital for a physical examination in November, and recuperate for more than half a month. The current physical fitness is really poor. The year before last, I was obese. I lost my mild fatty liver. This year, I have a moderate fatty liver. I am worried that I will die young. I will try my best to exercise this month and never stay up late!
Based on this calculation, I will probably start to prepare the outline and prepare the manuscript in December. Considering the state of this year during the Chinese New Year period, I have initially decided to publish a new book after the Spring Festival.
Ah, if it is delayed until then, the popularity that is not rich is probably worsened, but there is no way out, work and life are more important, at worst, let’s start all over again.
Dear book friends, the mountains are high and the roads are far away, there will be a period (v＾_＾)v.